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Scifi Short Story, Help with some rocket science requested
tacitus
post Jan 23 2006, 04:36 AM
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Hi, I've just written the first draft of a science fiction short story and I need little help with the plausibility factor smile.gif. Since many highly educated people hang out in this forum (flattery will get me everywhere... I hope!) I thought this might be a good place to ask a few questions.

The story is about a colossal creature (think Titan-sized, as in the moon Titan) that lives amongst the stars, travelling from solar system to solar system, hibernating while in between. (Hey, I didn't claim it was original smile.gif.) I'm not so concerned about the plausibility of such a species evolving as I am about how the creature is powered.

The creature's internal systems are powered (for want of a better word) by a fission reactor, which I think is okay. But its propulsion is powered by the burning of hydrogen and oxygen (i.e. as in rocket fuel) extracted from water - and this is the bit I'm unsure about.

I know hydrogen and oxygen can be extracted from water, and with a colossal nuclear reactor at its core there is enough energy for the creature to do so, but I just don't know how plausible this whole propulsion set up it. (I guess I can live with "unlikely", I just don't want to base the story on something that's "impossible".

An important aspect of the story as it is written is that the creature needs to stock up on its water supply and has to munch on moon-sized objects to do so (think Europa-sized or smaller in this instance). So its critical for the story that water, and the need to replenish its supply of water, plays a very large factor in the creature's life. I know we are talking colossal sizes and amounts of water here, but that's part of the nature of the story.

So, what do you think? Am I on the right track or careening off the rails?

Any help at all would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks,

Mike
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post Jan 23 2006, 03:32 PM
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Well I'm not educated tongue.gif but a several thousand Km wide planet eating space monster that is fusion powered yet is propelled by H2+O2 is like a nuclear submarine propelled by paddles! You got fusion power, just us it to plasmify a propellant (H2O, H2, heck any materially eaten) and vector it out, it should give you many times the specific impulse of H2+O2 combustion. The creature will likely have a preference for hydrogen for its fusion reactor(s) thus planets with water (planets with gaseous hydrogen will likely be too big to eat)
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post Jan 23 2006, 03:52 PM
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QUOTE (exobioquest @ Jan 23 2006, 09:32 AM)
Well I'm not educated  tongue.gif but a several thousand Km wide planet eating space monster that is fusion powered yet is propelled by H2+O2 is like a nuclear submarine propelled by paddles! You got fusion power, just us it to plasmify a propellant (H2O, H2, heck any materially eaten) and vector it out, it should give you many times the specific impulse of H2+O2 combustion. The creature will likely have a preference for hydrogen for its fusion reactor(s) thus planets with water (planets with gaseous hydrogen will likely be too big to eat)
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Good point - but the way the story stands the creature has an internal fission reactor, not fusion. Does that make any difference? (Probably not, I guess). Thanks for the tip.
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post Jan 23 2006, 04:14 PM
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Have you read Gregory Benford's 2000 SF novel, Eater?

http://www.space.com/sciencefiction/books/eater_000317.html

http://www.sfsite.com/05a/eat80.htm

http://www.scifi.com/sfw/issue152/books.html

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eater_%28novel%29

And knock my socks off - I just discovered that someone has written a screenplay of the novel and it is online here:

http://www.lasttemplar.com/PDF/EATER.pdf


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and feel as if I had done some wrong, and it is hard to forget the ugly circumstance.
I see that such intercourse long continued would make one thoroughly prosaic, hard,
and coarse. But the longest intercourse with Nature, though in her rudest moods, does
not thus harden and make coarse. A hard, sensible man whom we liken to a rock is
indeed much harder than a rock. From hard, coarse, insensible men with whom I have
no sympathy, I go to commune with the rocks, whose hearts are comparatively soft."

- Henry David Thoreau, November 15, 1853

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