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Apr 7 2006, 10:20 AM
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Some of you may have spotted Stuarts poem over in the 5-wheels thread, and rather stupidly I culled it ( in light of the new rules ) instead of moving it to here - because it's an excellent piece...hopefully he can repost it in here..
A bit of googling around and I found this http://www.sffworld.com/community/story/1150p0.html If you like MER, if you like Mars - read it...it's a stunning short story, almost had me in tears. Nico, you HAVE to read it, same with you Ustrax - it's utterly brilliant - it captures my visions of the future of the Columbia Hills very well indeed. Doug |
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Apr 29 2006, 04:48 PM
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![]() The Poet Dude ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Moderator Posts: 5551 Joined: 15-March 04 From: Kendal, Cumbria, UK Member No.: 60 |
Inspired by the stunning work our ImageMage's collaborated on recently for the "Solset panorama"...
El Dorado Dusk At solset, this world is glorious. Shadows lengthen, stretching Lazily across a landscape surrendering to the night. Colours deepen, senses sharpen; Beauty swathes the ugliest Boulders in an ochre cloak of bruised and burnished gold. Shooting stars skip giddily o’erhead Even before the Sun has fled Abandoning El Dorado to the stark, Noachian Dark. And yet, in Ancient Ages Water, not dust, this silent basin filled Beneath an aching sky as blue as the Dusk Star’s sapphire hue. My rocks, kissed by raindrops - Tears shed for Life’s Lost World – Glistened like jewels in the feather-soft light of dawn. But no salty sea surges here now. Though once these rugged rocks felt The vaguest tickle, the briefest, tenderest touch of Life They are now skeletons of stone; Time first bathed and soothed them But now has dried and cracked these stones to splintered bone. And yet, at solset, Beauty. This cold world lovingly painted gold. When Men come here, they will see this Temple of Light, and cry. © Stuart Atkinson 2006 -------------------- |
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djellison Rover related writing Apr 7 2006, 10:20 AM
Tesheiner Remember when he posted this one at the other MER ... Apr 7 2006, 11:30 AM
MahFL That is a nice short story. Apr 7 2006, 12:08 PM
Stu Thanks everyone for the wonderful reviews, wow...... Apr 7 2006, 01:19 PM
chris Stu,
I didn't see this the first time, and I... Apr 7 2006, 01:42 PM
Toma B Stuart Atkinson, this is just lovely poem...I have... Apr 7 2006, 01:57 PM
Stu Maybe someday somebody will write a poem about Opp... Apr 7 2006, 02:03 PM
djellison The Opportunity one is cool, somehow you got throu... Apr 7 2006, 02:19 PM
Nix QUOTE (djellison @ Apr 7 2006, 12:20 PM) ... Apr 7 2006, 02:56 PM
Bob Shaw Doug:
I'm devastated that my pome wasn't ... Apr 7 2006, 08:44 PM
Stu Toma: Maybe someday somebody will write a poem abo... Apr 10 2006, 11:21 AM
Toma B Beautifull!!!
You really did it... Apr 10 2006, 12:13 PM
Stu New short story about Opportunity and Victoria cra... Apr 16 2006, 05:40 PM
dilo Stuart, I discovered only now this thread ( ) and... Apr 29 2006, 05:19 PM
Stu I wish! No, I work in a Care home... in what I... Apr 29 2006, 05:50 PM
Nix Many thanks Stu, that's wonderful. It stirs ... Apr 29 2006, 07:38 PM
Astro0 Stu, About your poetry...one word: BRILLIANT
Astro... May 1 2006, 11:56 AM
Stu Thanks Astro0, glad you liked it, just playing wit... May 1 2006, 04:34 PM
hendric Broken wheel
White dust trail
Winter haven May 16 2006, 08:53 PM
ustrax QUOTE (djellison @ Apr 7 2006, 11:20 AM) ... May 18 2006, 09:32 AM
djellison And - check out this months Planetary Report
Dou... May 18 2006, 10:15 AM
ustrax QUOTE (djellison @ May 18 2006, 11:15 AM)... May 18 2006, 12:59 PM
djellison 1) SHAME ON YOU
2) One of Stu's poems is in ... May 18 2006, 01:43 PM
ustrax QUOTE (djellison @ May 18 2006, 02:43 PM)... May 18 2006, 04:29 PM
Stu Thought Victoria deserved a poem as we approach he... May 21 2006, 10:48 AM
ustrax That metal messenger will have a word on that... ... May 22 2006, 09:24 AM
angel1801 I have always been looking for poetry about the ME... May 22 2006, 02:11 PM
jamescanvin Brilliant as usual Stu, great work.
James May 21 2006, 10:44 PM
chris Stu,
Fantastic. Thank you
Chris May 22 2006, 02:20 PM
Stu New story up here...
Meridiani Messenger May 27 2006, 05:10 PM
Stu JOURNEY’S END
Through hushed halls they stalked -... May 28 2006, 03:53 PM
Stu Self-explanatory really...
STEVE’S FAREWELL
We... Jun 2 2006, 01:52 PM
hendric Brings a tear to the eye, it does. Thanks Stu. Jun 2 2006, 03:06 PM
ljk4-1 About a star so often used by deep space probes to... Jun 7 2006, 07:56 PM
Stu Just a quick note to invite you all to visit the n... Jun 14 2006, 01:56 PM
chris QUOTE (Stu @ Jun 14 2006, 02:56 PM) Just ... Jun 14 2006, 02:33 PM
dvandorn I enjoyed seeing your work in the latest edition o... Jun 14 2006, 06:15 PM
Stu Dedicated (not before time!) to all the people... Jun 23 2006, 05:43 AM
jamescanvin Fantastic as always Stu, thanks Jun 23 2006, 05:59 AM
ngunn Breaking Views
Humanity has grown new eyes.
They ... Oct 10 2006, 11:14 AM
sranderson Hi folks. I have posted a few times, mostly in th... Nov 3 2006, 05:42 PM
Stu QUOTE (sranderson @ Nov 3 2006, 05:42 PM)... Nov 3 2006, 06:15 PM
um3k I was rather bored, so I wrote a couple of rather ... Dec 6 2006, 03:43 PM![]() ![]() |
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