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djellison
post Apr 7 2006, 10:20 AM
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Some of you may have spotted Stuarts poem over in the 5-wheels thread, and rather stupidly I culled it ( in light of the new rules ) instead of moving it to here - because it's an excellent piece...hopefully he can repost it in here..

A bit of googling around and I found this

http://www.sffworld.com/community/story/1150p0.html

If you like MER, if you like Mars - read it...it's a stunning short story, almost had me in tears. Nico, you HAVE to read it, same with you Ustrax - it's utterly brilliant - it captures my visions of the future of the Columbia Hills very well indeed.

Doug
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sranderson
post Nov 3 2006, 05:42 PM
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Hi folks. I have posted a few times, mostly in the Opportunity section. I actually was involved in MER, responsible for the Remote Engineering Unit modules (one on each lander and one on each cruise stage), as well as being systems engineer for the power and pyro driver modules. I managed the REU efforts and worked with two other design engineers and production staff to get the modules designed, built, and tested. I did my own inspection of each board prior to first power-on and again prior to shipment. I'll always remember holding those boards, knowing that they were going to Mars.

I also write a little. Here is something you may enjoy.


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We have come very late.

The smell of age blows across the cracked biscuits of the old seabed,
pushing up burnt-brown echos of lost waves.

The dunes would be sand on another world -- a younger world.
But here, the deep ages have ground the sand to dust,
And the dust has passed to finest powder.

It is just as well.
The wind, thin and cold,
has lost any strength for sand.
Powder alone can it streak and softly pile.

And nothing else has moved forever.

Yes, we are much too late.
The seas waited for us, drying, refilling, and drying many times.
Waited past life, past death, to frozen dry bone dust,
The shrunken sun passing eternally, numbingly, above.

In dim memory, things may have gloried and battled
in these shallow seas; in that warm milky green water.

Were there eyes to watch that scene?
Could there have been thought,
Or even understanding?

And did they ever dream the possibility
Of this dead time,
so far down time's arrow,
so far from life?

All is gone now,
Or perhaps held fast in substrata and darkness.
But I fear that those ancient eyes have become part of the dust-that-blows.

A meteor streaks, falls, and oddly,
Bounces.
A completely new thing.

We see through its eyes:
The dune sea,
the biscuit bed,
hints of water and salt,
Holes blasted deep by the bombardments of antiquity.

In these craters, we seek the old echos
as we wander and dig and grind.

We are disturbing this dead world.
We plan to disturb it further.
Even life, which left long ago,
May yet return.

Or we may squander this last opportunity.
The dust fills our tracks as our spirit wavers.
On Mars, a bet on entropy to win
Is always a sure thing.

Age after age, that soft-blown powder
will dig and scour,
wearing our machines down,
carelessly scattering their atoms
in thin new layers across the seabeds.

Mars understands this well.

It has all the time in the world.
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- djellison   Rover related writing   Apr 7 2006, 10:20 AM
- - Tesheiner   Remember when he posted this one at the other MER ...   Apr 7 2006, 11:30 AM
- - MahFL   That is a nice short story.   Apr 7 2006, 12:08 PM
- - Stu   Thanks everyone for the wonderful reviews, wow......   Apr 7 2006, 01:19 PM
|- - chris   Stu, I didn't see this the first time, and I...   Apr 7 2006, 01:42 PM
- - Toma B   Stuart Atkinson, this is just lovely poem...I have...   Apr 7 2006, 01:57 PM
- - Stu   Maybe someday somebody will write a poem about Opp...   Apr 7 2006, 02:03 PM
- - djellison   The Opportunity one is cool, somehow you got throu...   Apr 7 2006, 02:19 PM
- - Nix   QUOTE (djellison @ Apr 7 2006, 12:20 PM) ...   Apr 7 2006, 02:56 PM
- - Bob Shaw   Doug: I'm devastated that my pome wasn't ...   Apr 7 2006, 08:44 PM
- - Stu   Toma: Maybe someday somebody will write a poem abo...   Apr 10 2006, 11:21 AM
- - Toma B   Beautifull!!! You really did it...   Apr 10 2006, 12:13 PM
- - Stu   New short story about Opportunity and Victoria cra...   Apr 16 2006, 05:40 PM
- - Stu   Inspired by the stunning work our ImageMage's ...   Apr 29 2006, 04:48 PM
|- - dilo   Stuart, I discovered only now this thread ( ) and...   Apr 29 2006, 05:19 PM
- - Stu   I wish! No, I work in a Care home... in what I...   Apr 29 2006, 05:50 PM
- - Nix   Many thanks Stu, that's wonderful. It stirs ...   Apr 29 2006, 07:38 PM
- - Astro0   Stu, About your poetry...one word: BRILLIANT Astro...   May 1 2006, 11:56 AM
- - Stu   Thanks Astro0, glad you liked it, just playing wit...   May 1 2006, 04:34 PM
- - hendric   Broken wheel White dust trail Winter haven   May 16 2006, 08:53 PM
- - ustrax   QUOTE (djellison @ Apr 7 2006, 11:20 AM) ...   May 18 2006, 09:32 AM
- - djellison   And - check out this months Planetary Report Dou...   May 18 2006, 10:15 AM
|- - ustrax   QUOTE (djellison @ May 18 2006, 11:15 AM)...   May 18 2006, 12:59 PM
- - djellison   1) SHAME ON YOU 2) One of Stu's poems is in ...   May 18 2006, 01:43 PM
|- - ustrax   QUOTE (djellison @ May 18 2006, 02:43 PM)...   May 18 2006, 04:29 PM
- - Stu   Thought Victoria deserved a poem as we approach he...   May 21 2006, 10:48 AM
|- - ustrax   That metal messenger will have a word on that... ...   May 22 2006, 09:24 AM
|- - angel1801   I have always been looking for poetry about the ME...   May 22 2006, 02:11 PM
- - jamescanvin   Brilliant as usual Stu, great work. James   May 21 2006, 10:44 PM
- - chris   Stu, Fantastic. Thank you Chris   May 22 2006, 02:20 PM
- - Stu   New story up here... Meridiani Messenger   May 27 2006, 05:10 PM
- - Stu   JOURNEY’S END Through hushed halls they stalked -...   May 28 2006, 03:53 PM
- - Stu   Self-explanatory really... STEVE’S FAREWELL We...   Jun 2 2006, 01:52 PM
- - hendric   Brings a tear to the eye, it does. Thanks Stu.   Jun 2 2006, 03:06 PM
- - ljk4-1   About a star so often used by deep space probes to...   Jun 7 2006, 07:56 PM
- - Stu   Just a quick note to invite you all to visit the n...   Jun 14 2006, 01:56 PM
|- - chris   QUOTE (Stu @ Jun 14 2006, 02:56 PM) Just ...   Jun 14 2006, 02:33 PM
- - dvandorn   I enjoyed seeing your work in the latest edition o...   Jun 14 2006, 06:15 PM
- - Stu   Dedicated (not before time!) to all the people...   Jun 23 2006, 05:43 AM
- - jamescanvin   Fantastic as always Stu, thanks   Jun 23 2006, 05:59 AM
- - ngunn   Breaking Views Humanity has grown new eyes. They ...   Oct 10 2006, 11:14 AM
- - sranderson   Hi folks. I have posted a few times, mostly in th...   Nov 3 2006, 05:42 PM
|- - Stu   QUOTE (sranderson @ Nov 3 2006, 05:42 PM)...   Nov 3 2006, 06:15 PM
- - um3k   I was rather bored, so I wrote a couple of rather ...   Dec 6 2006, 03:43 PM


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